Alex has been working on the goal of adding verbs and adjectives to make his writing interesting. I thought he did a fabulous job of achieving his goals in this poem. What do you think?
Yellow is the sun striking down on the beautiful planet Earth
Yellow is daisies blooming in the sun
Yellow is paint getting stroked from a brush
Yellow makes feel happy inside
Good work Alex! I like the way yellow is so bright that it can jump off the page and help you to find important things, too!
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