Monday, March 28, 2011

Red Poem - by Devon

Devon is currently working using words that paint pictures for her readers.  She is trying to choose her adjectives and verbs carefully.  What do you think of her poem?

Red is a top waiting for someone to wear it
Red is a flame of a burning camp fire
Red is c lock ding dong
Red is a drink bottle someone is slurping it up
Red makes me feel happy dancing along.





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