Samantha has been learning to use verbs and adjectives in her writing to make it more interesting. Can you spot any in this piece of writing?
When Mum was in the book shop at the school fair dad and I crept away. I went on the baby pony. My head was wobbling all over the place because I had the biggest helmet on like Tia. I had Nothings sandals on and my shoes almost fell off but I managed to keep them on. Then the ride was over and dad and I went off to find mummy. I had an awesome day.
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