Brylie has been working on a goal of writing independently and as part of our Colour My World inquiry learning wrote a poem about the colour red. Room 9 is very proud of Brylie as she did this on her own and we think it paints amazing pictures in our minds. We hope you enjoy listening to her reading it.
Brylie - that is an awesome poem with lovely imagery! I think Room 7 might have to have a go at writing their own colour poems... Perhaps you could visit there and comment when they publish there :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful piece of writing brylie.i love the word swaying.katie
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