Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Beach Education - by Oliver

On Monday room 9 and room 10 went to beach ed.  First we got ready then we walked to the beach.  We put our things in the girls and boys changing rooms, then we went to the life guards.  They introduced themselves.  After that we watched a safety movie and did other safety things.  Then we went for morning tea.  After that we went on a journey around the club.  First we went to the IRB shed.  They showed us the boat and the motor.  Secondly we went to the canoes and the kayaks.  Thirdly they went and they showed us the first aid kit.  Fourthly we had Jimmy's party lunch.  It was delicious!  Then we went down to the beach.  We got to play some games.  When the others were in the water, me and some other people made joining tunnels in  a broken-down sand castle.  After that we went back to school.  It was awesome. 
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3 comments:

  1. Donna & Richard YoungFebruary 23, 2011 at 8:44 PM

    Fantastic writing Oliver, we felt as though we were there. Great descriptions of your learning.

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  2. ClaireFebruary 28, 2011 at 12:47 AM

    Kia ora Oliver! What fantastic recounting of your class experience at Beach Ed! I can see that you have been thinking about the introduction, events in order and your evaluation of the day... Could you use these three chapters to have a go at paragraphing?

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2011 at 5:58 PM

    Hi Oliver, nice work and expression on what you did that day, with detail and good sentences.

    Kohen

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