Once upon a time there was a bird called Pukeko. Pukeko was red but one day he turned a different colour. Pukeko was disgusted with his swamp so he wanted to get out of his very, very stinky swamp so he ran as fast as he could out of his stinky swamp. He looked and looked for a clean forest and eventually he found one. Pukeko saw some bees and touched one of them. They were so angry at Pukeko that they stung him until he squawked very loudly. The bees buzzed away buzz, buzz back home. Pukeko started to run back to his musty swamp. While Pukeko was running, Pukeko ran into loads and loads of blueberries and turned blue. When he returned to his swamp, nobody recognised him because he was a different colour thanks to the blueberries.
By Kohen
That is truely awesome Kohen, great use of words and a super plot..:)
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cool story kohen
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