Last Friday was Kapa Haka, the real performance. I was so excited when I walked on stage. I saw heaps of people. I saw my Mum and Dad. I started to sing and dance. A shiver crept up my spine. I felt so nervous I nearly fell off the stage. I swung my poi up and down. I got hit in the head.
Wow Mackenzie - I think this is once of your best pieces of writing all year!! I love the way you have used adjectives and verbs to paint pictures. I think I can feel how you felt when you tell me about the shiver creeping up your spine! Great work - Mrs Wood
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing Mackenzie - we were very proud of you doing Kapa Haka at the Edgar Centre and you looked like you were having fun - Mum & Dad
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