Going to the hall, I do not know what is going on. I saw people in costumes, now I know it’s… Kapa Haka. I started to smile. I saw the dance and I thought that I should have done Kapa Haka too. I got out of that moment of thinking about being in Kapa Haka. When Kapa Haka was done I was proud. Then walking out, I remembered back to last year and when I was doing it. Then I said to myself, “I’ll do it next year.” I now know that Kapa Haka is so much fun to people that are in it, and by their faces that they were very, very happy with what they did. I think they did too because I loved what they did.
Good work on getting your writing published Kayla. I really like how you have tried to use a variety of sentence starters as this makes it interesting for your reader. I'm glad that you think you will take part in Kapa Haka next year - it's an awesome experience - Mrs Wood
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